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**Warning! Becky gets a bit snappish but it's only out of love for Stevenson.***
Author: Kady Cross
Genre: Steampunk
Audience: young adult
Pages: 473 (though the first ~100 pages consists of the prequel, "The Strange Case of Finley Jayne," which I actually enjoyed more than the novel)
Source: library (Becky); Bought (Randi)
Rating: 1 (Becky) I'd drop-kick this book off the roof of my 10 story library in the name of all gothic literature. But to be fair, I couldn't bring myself to read more than 225 pages of it.
3 (Randi) I'd friend this book on Facebook so I could check out all the pictures of its badass steampunk clothes!

Goodreads Summary:
In 1897 England, sixteen-year-old Finley Jayne has no one...except the "thing" inside her.When a young lord tries to take advantage of Finley, she fights back. And wins. But no "normal" Victorian girl has a darker side that makes her capable of knocking out a full-grown man with one punch....
Only Griffin King sees the magical darkness inside her that says she's special, says she's one of "them." The orphaned duke takes her in from the gaslit streets against the wishes of his band of misfits: Emily, who has her own special abilities and an unrequited love for Sam, who is part robot; and Jasper, an American cowboy with a shadowy secret.
Griffin's investigating a criminal called The Machinist, the mastermind behind several recent crimes by automatons. Finley thinks she can help--and finally be a part of something, finally fit in.
But The Machinist wants to tear Griff's little company of strays apart, and it isn't long before trust is tested on all sides. At least Finley knows whose side she's on--even if it seems no one believes her.
(Becky in black text, Randi in red!)
Our thoughts: Do you like poorly written, shallow adaptations of classics? Then this book is for you. All others run away as fast as you can. It wasn't that bad! :P I really struggled to come up with anything to warrant this one star, and finally I decided the details about clothes were kind of nice...if you like victorian/steampunk clothes. I reaaaally liked the clothes! Other than that, this reads like bad fan-fiction. I thought it played out its adaptation of Jekyll/Hyde pretty well! Cross took Robert Louis Stevenson's idea and came up with her own backstory and implications for it. Yes, a boring backstory with none of Stevenson's depth. Adapting classics is very different from adapting fairytales, which start out as an empty framework. Pssssh, the backstory was good in theory, just not executed as well as it should have been! :P
The author clearly has good taste in classic, gothic literature. She draws parallels to Shelley and Stevenson, with hints of Austen. Yay for Shelley's Frankenstein and Stevenson's The Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde (a favorite!). Unfortunately, though she'd clearly read those older texts, she didn't really seem to grasp what they were about on any of the deeper levels. For instance, Dr J and Mr H was not about a purely good man and a purely evil creature. Dr J was dark to begin with. I think it's more as though she's trying to fuse her two "natures" back together rather than exorcise her "evil" side; I didn't feel like it was angel versus devil, more "normal" versus "being-without-inhibitions." Cross also didn't seem to understand that a key element of gothic horror is the suspense, of which there was none in this book. I would agree with the suspense-lessness. It took a while to get explanations on specifics, but the villain was pretty obvious less than halfway through the book. It was all predictable and everything was rushed. I had the entire plot figured out within the first few chapters. You're no fun!!! ;). I can't help it!!
In all fairness, I don't understand steampunk and I'm not sure I want to. LOOOVE it! Why would everyone dress in uncomfortable clothes and do things that made no sense for the technology they possess? HALT. Say what?! What do you mean by things that don't make sense with the technology?! :-0. If you are adept enough to make most of the mechanics of this book, you should be beyond having servants for the most part. You should be beyond wearing enormous dresses for no reason. It seems like a key flaw in the genre, for me anyway. I think the dresses were not actually big (I don't think the one on the cover matches the ones described ~ they're usually described as being short with stockings, so I was picturing miniskirt, corset, leggings kinda thing). And rich people now have servants, silly! lol. Not to this degree!
It also seemed like this book didn't really know what it wanted to be. It could have worked as a continuation of a gothic novel, or a fantasy novel without the literary parallels, but together it was jarring. I think it could have been better (I really really LOVED it until about halfway through, then I just liked it. The tensions between characters seemed believable but unimportant). When writers try to walk in the footsteps of the greats, most people are going to stumble. Can't argue with that! Perhaps it's the English majoriness in us that makes us a bit...snobbish(?) in that aspect? ;). Perhaps it's my intense love of the original novel :(. OUCH. That's one of my favorite novels! You just made me feel bad for liking TGitSC. :(
The characters failed to have any consistency or believability in thought-process or actions. In one scene the MC doesn't know any cuss words, in the next she cusses like a sailor. In part that could be explained by her father's identity...but the author never links it. The male protagonist was a complete Mary Sue and I kind of wanted him to get run over by mechanical horses. Whoa, girl. You better take that back when you're talking about Griffin! I adored him. What a sweetiepie hahaha. The secondary characters were incredibly boring stock types. You could yank most of them from the story without problem. Hmm. Yeah, that's true. I didn't like Sam, Jasper was boring, but Jack and Emily were fun. Though it seemed like Finley's perceptions of Jack were entirely skewed.... (SPOILER: Seriously? You're going to stay at the dude's house after you "run away," but then you're "afraid" to have dinner with him? Inconsistent!!! /SPOILER)
In the end...A for the concept and F for execution. I'd say...A for concept, C+ for execution. Overall I liked it, but there are so many other books I want to read that I don't foresee myself continuing the series.
P.S. Did I mention the MC is blonde? Why does the girl on the cover have dark hair? That bugs the bejeepers out of me! Although, at least in this book there's a point to the dress, though Finley's are usually short dresses. Honestly though, how much more difficult would it have been to find a blonde model?
P.P.S. I love the names in this book ~ Finley, Cordelia, Jasper, Griffin (especially Griffin); they feel fitting for the time period, but they're a little bit special. :) I liked Finley :)!